Chris, I'm sorry, but that video about AI War 2 is really rough. It dumps way too much information that's not necessary for Kickstarter without really talking about the Kickstarter itself. It needs to be much longer, much better paced and with a lot more human touch than this. I don't know, I'm really concerned about this being the front running video for your campaign.
I need to keep thinking on this but I have a lot of misgivings on it.
No one, and I mean NO ONE, watches those long, talky bits on a Kickstarter. Catch them in the first 10 seconds or you are #¤%#%¤. The long talky bits can be left for the sprawling text on the page. Or even update videos. NOT the presentation video.
I, for one, that this was short, concise, to the point and above all had EXCELLENT VO. Whoever did that VO: Creds.