Wiki Proofreading Required

[Pumpkin]

Hello. I just added some lines to the wiki (link to the page) and not being a native speaker, I hope someone will correct me. The sooner the better: I came on the forum to ask it. The italic part was written by someone else.

Factory and ASC hacks are pretty expensive, but potentially worth it if they're in particularly indefensible spots. Hacking both once require 250 HaP, which can be quite expensive. Also remember that the B Core Shield Generator network is only on planets with Advanced Factory or ASC, so you will need to capture at least one, but with hacking, you won't need to defend it for long.

Thanks in advance.

[PokerChen]

Hacking both once require 250 HaP, which can be quite expensive.  Also remember that the B [[AI_War:Prerequisites to Winning#Core Shield Generators|Core Shield Generator]] network is only on planets with Advanced Factory or ASC, so you will need to capture at least one, but with hacking, you won't need to defend it for long.

Fixed grammar and game technicality - I leave this here since I forgot my wiki login. IIRC you have to do the hack before you capture the planet.

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Hacking both of these requires 250 HaP in total, which can be quite expensive.
Also remember that the B [[AI_War:Prerequisites to Winning#Core Shield Generators|Core Shield Generator]] network is found only on planets with Advanced Factory or ASC,
so you will need to capture at least one, but if you do a hack before capturing the planet, you won't need to defend it afterwards.


[Dominus Arbitrationis]

I forgot my wiki login.

I think I remember seeing your name on the imported user list so your login should be the Same as your forum one, Unless you already had a wiki account. If you need it reset That's easy too.