As I pointed out above, these pages* might become more pleasant to read if you divide the text into subcategories along the lines of "General discription", "Notes", "Trivia"
Screw that it's pretty much any page except the ones that are lists/navigation and the ones that already have a good use of subcategories like the AI Eyes page (well done!). Especially Mark, Cap and wave could use a better structure than "one paragraph per sentence".
I'm well aware of that problem, however I feel there would be so few things to say per subcategory that I prefer having one paragraph per idea (and sometimes one sentence is enough, so yes, one sentence per category).
I went and tried to apply your suggestion for the Cap page. Here are the old version
and the new version
. I only changed first-words-bold by subcategory names. Is it really better? The subcategories really feel empty to me.
If you get around to it please use more sprites and images. Especially the Mark page would profit from in game mark I to V images next to their discription.
That's a good advice. However, I only use game's sprites, and I don't naturally see where I can use them. For instance, I tried hard to find something for the AI Plot list
, especially for the shark ones; I used a Raid Starship and the Warbird sprites, but I'm not found of it.
Imo, the wave page should have a "See also" link category redirection to an article collecting all sources of AI attacks (dunno if there is such a page but there should be) including waves, threat, exo strike force, cpa, etc...
. My front-page proposal has a subcategory "AI Mechanisms" which has a sub-subcategory "Offense", listing Wave, Cross Planet Attack, Exogalactic Strikeforce, Threat and Reprisal. I sure can make a dedicated page with these five items, but I doubt it would be a very interesting page. At best, I can add "There are the means the AI has to attack Humans", but I believe "AI Mechanisms/Offense" speaks by itself.
EDIT: Oh, but maybe you meant a backlink from the pages? Yes, okay, I'll do that. A "see also" subcategory should do the trick, indeed.
A subcategory with screenshots of all Interface parts that give you information about waves should be added to the wave page as well.
Yep. Screenshots might be interesting. However I'm afraid it would be much time consuming to make and cut and upload and place these screenshots (that's why I use game's sprites) and I'm already pouring much time into reorganization and missing content creation. But if you're motivated enough for that kind of job, I'm sure you'll do nicely. You seem to have a precise idea of what kind of screenshots and where to put them, so go ahead. I'll be more than happy to have some help.
Anyway, thanks a lot for those useful, constructive critics.